Good, simple message. Given the target audience for this stage of the welcome center what about changing the first line to:Allen wrote:FREE WORLD:
Everyone who joins Kitely gets a free world.
You can do anything you want with it. To
claim your new home, just click the globe
behind you.
(Click sends whisper 'Click the globe behind you.')
Everyone who joins Kitely gets a free, full sim.
(Would that be technically accurate? Each Kitely world runs in its own instance, yes?)
That would spoil the visual link with the clicking the globe though.
What a good name for a "New to Kitely" group! Perhaps "You can ask your questions via group chat" to avoid verbing "group chat".Allen wrote:COMMUNITY:
Click to Join the First Flight Group. It's a cool way to
introduce yourself and meet others. You can
group chat your questions and enjoy great
welcome gifts.
(click sends group invitation)
A simple, clear message.Allen wrote:MARKET:
You can buy and sell virtual goods to most grids
from the Kitely Market. Click here to get started.
(links to Market)
This message will need quite a bit more unpicking. The flexibility Kitely pricing provides makes it complex to communicate and even to understand.Allen wrote:MINUTES:
Kitely is FREE for 2 hours each month.
If you want more than two hours, it costs
about 17¢ an hour while you are in world.
You can choose to play for free, or buy
additional minutes, like you would
for a cell phone. You also get additional
regions (sims) when you chose a paid plan.
(Click opens http://www.kitely.com/settings) - could i add anything to open the change plan js window?Code: Select all
Price Time Regions Free 2 hours 1 $5 30 hours 2 $20 120 hours 10 $35 Unlimited 20
Where does the 17 cents come from? I've always used 20 cents as the equivalent cost of an hour inworld. (300 KC buys 300 minutes, or 5 hours; 300 KC costs 1 dollar at the maximum discount rate, so 1 hour costs $1/5 = 20 cents.)
Rather than using the "free" hours inworld as a hook, which requires a great deal of complicated explanation and clarification, why not focus directly on the different plans, which are easier to explain and understand.
A positive way of doing this might be via user comments on how they actually use Kitely -- see How precious are your Kitely minutes? for example.
There was mention of embedding a decision flow chart into a learning trail, where at each juncture you would choose between two options for how you use virtual worlds, and which would help lead you to the appropriate plan for what you want to do. Could we perhaps try to create such a flow chart? It might be useful more generally, too.






